Reaping

 

 

With a thrilling chill down my spine

this anomoly envelopes me taking what is mine,

like a poisonus venom coursing through my vein

he takes from me all that keep me sane,

but i know i shall never quit

because by some reason that i sumbmit,

I shall be rendered cold and heartless

drowned and encompassedin swirling darkness,

battering and tearing at my resolve making me weak

my near future seems horrid and bleak.

Reviews

[Hello, Goodbye]

really strong dark imagery.. i love that...

[Katrina Mckeown]

I enjoyed reading this, great and well written poem ! :-)