It wasn't a costume

This creepypasta is about a girls' friend , "dressing up" like a murderess for Halloween but looks can be deceiving.

My friend Melody, has always loved dressing up for Halloween. Last year, she dressed up as a masked killer and this year, she dressed up as a murderess ; I loved it. We were going to a Halloween party, for teens only of course (wink wink). Everyone including us, looked quite awesome tonight. My friend had on a bloody dress with a kitchen knife and her face, was cut from ear to ear and I was a sexy pirate. 

But, there was something odd about Melody. She was walking slow, her eyes look like she hadn't slept in days and her skin, was pale. I asked hr, if she was alright and Melany just nodded. We had fun that night and we won the costume contest. 

Later on that night, Melody was walking much much slower than before..and she looked very tired and sick. Suddenly. I saw real blood coming from her mouth. She opened her mouth. A little wider while coughing up blood. Then realized something...she wasn't wearing an actual costume. She had actually cut her mouth from ear to ear.  But what made all those blood stains on her dress ?

She went on a killing spree that night ; killing everyone at the party. I was lucky enough to escape. I ran to the police station, to tell them about Melody and how she killed all those people. The police man chuckled.  " We've been trying to catch her, since last year". what?? I thought to myself with a confused look on my face. " What do you mean" ? I said with a shaky voice. Your friend Melody, had escaped from a insane asylum, a year ago and she killed over 50 people. 

Reviews

[genocide]

I like this one a lot it's really good

[Valkyrie Warrior]

I like is so much I wish there was more!

[Open Your Mind Before Y..]

I like this, I just wish it was longer to where it was maybe like a short story. If it led up to like a mystery and ended up finding out she escaped from the insane asylum, that would have been awesome!

[kenya smith]

Thanks :) I was going to make it longer but, i developed writer's block and I couldn't figure out what to write. Hey, Do you mind reading and reviewing my newest story ?
http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/EternalXNight/1375962/

[Jack Kennedy]

I like this, it actually sounds like a creepypasta and its well done on the execution.
Cool pasta and definitely if expanded could rival Jeff the killer's creepypasta
8.8/10