Black Eyes

Black Eyes

A Story by kenya smith
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This story is basically about Black- Eyed Kids.

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Have you ever heard of BEK or Black-Eyed Kids ? If yes , then you know how paranoid they make you. if you never heard of BEK, then let me tell you a bit about them. Black-Eyed people ; mostly kids, are a paranormal phenomenon, who people say are supernatural and dangerous. 

They appear to have bluish-tinted skin and solid black eyes. There is no differentiation between the sclera, pupil or iris. You can often see them in deserted areas, playing , singing songs like "old man long legs" or "He jumped into a bramble bush". Sometimes, they may appear on your doorstep ; usually alone or in pairs and if they see you, they will halt what they're doing, and stare.

When they speak, their voices sound mature; too mature for their apparent age. Other times, they will talk to you and ask you questions like,... " can you I use your phone?", "can you give me a ride home?" ,Perhaps "can I come inside?" or even "can you give me a place to stay"? If you refuse, they will get angry and become demanding. These kids will keep asking you questions until you comply. 

Now, no one knows what happens, if you comply, but, I be sure it won't be pleasant. How would I know ? Hm..I bet you want to know. All you've got to do is open your door, and let me in. 

© 2014 kenya smith


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Whoa this is wonderfully horrifying.....I love it!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Nice. I like that last line especially. Good read 8.2/10

Posted 10 Years Ago


This was an eerie write. I loved it horror junkie :).

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kenya smith

10 Years Ago

You're free to read some of my other stories :)
New Theory

10 Years Ago

Anything specific you want me to read, mail me :) . I will be glad to read.
kenya smith

10 Years Ago

http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/EternalXNight/1335560/
This actually gave me goosebumps. Doesn't happen much..bravo

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kenya smith

10 Years Ago

Thanks ! I got goosebumps, writing it. You're free to read some of of my other stories :)

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Added on April 26, 2014
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Tags: Horror

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kenya smith
kenya smith

Prairieville, LA



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I'm 25, and I have been writing for 7 years now. I love to write horror stories and poems but also sometimes I like to write teen drama. In the future, I hope to publish a book and also get a career i.. more..

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