What If?

What If?

A Poem by Jess
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Again, this started while i was going to sleep. It has taken a while to finish though, and i'm finally done.

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What if I told you I love you tonight,
with the stars in the night
so eternally bright
making all right?

What if I said you are my light,
erasing my pain,
making me sane,
smiling through the rain?

What if I surrendered my fright,
having the gall
to give you all,
not afraid to fall?

And in the end,
what if it wasn’t enough?

© 2009 Jess


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This is a wonderful poem about the most talked about emotion-- love. It was honest and passionate. It came from the heart and that is all tha natters. I enjoyed reading this piece. Great write. Kudos.

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Jess
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I'm 17, and I love poetry. I'm looking for constructive criticism. I write when I'm inspired, or just when the words form, so I don't know how often I'll add. more..

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