Broken

English project, 2008.

Picture
Crashes; screaming
Voices swirl around me.
Their echoes sustain my terror.
Tears fall.

Reviews

[-WolfReaper (NERV)]

Very short but to much emotion. Well done, jess.
"Voices swirl around me.
Their echoes sustain my terror."
Fav lines.

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Short, but very powerful
"Voices swirl around me.
Their echoes sustain my terror.
Tears fall."
I love these three lines which speak much of your dark and deep emotions - desperation
Nice write
Love it
~Kavish~