You are the stars

...and the stars are you...

                                                                                                                                                                                                                             

Oh, my dear morning star,

you came so unexpected;

Oh, my dear evening star,

you left me on this path misdirected;

Oh, my dear blazing star,

you filled my eyes with your lightness;

Oh, my dear falling star,

you disappeared with your brightness;

Oh, my dear guiding star,

you became my inspiration;

Oh, my dear polar star,

you still shine with your sensation.

Author's Note

Ah, another poem about him...so far my favorite because it describes our short story from the beginning until now, I hope you'll like it.

Reviews

[kij143]

"you filled my eyes with your lightness;
oh mu falling star, you dissapeared with your brightness"
^^^favorite line
nice use of repetition(:
that's a really cool rhyme scheme! every other line rymes, while its counterpart, both begins with oh my, and ends with star. thats realy cool. keep it up(:

[A. L. Z.]

Its beautiful! Love it.

[smalltownsympathies]

I like this a lot ! I love the shifts in stars !

[just is]

Wow this is really amazing, I enjoyed this alot. You write very well

[Coyote Poetry]

Somethings happen in a life. Leave scars and good memories forever. A beautiful poem. I like the description and the positive ending. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[sarah]

I really like this it's beautiful! and the picture it cool