You are a Part of Me

I stare into your cold hollow eyes,

Trying to make sense of it’s emptiness.

I miss the way you laugh into my hair,

Forgetting the world’s sadness.

 

Now, I glance at your ruffled hair,

And think about our past,

Knowing that it’s come undone,

In front of our eyes, so fast. 

 

Why can’t we wind the clock once more,

And go back to how it was?

I miss the comfort of your arms,

Keeping me from getting hurt.

 

Yet, I am still hurting,

A lot more than you think,

Since your absence in my life,

Creates a missing link.

 

You open your mouth in attempt to speak,

But, your silence impales me, you see.

But, sadly the truth cannot be ignored;

You are in fact, a part of me. 

Author's Note

One of my first pieces of actual poetry. It's not great, but I like it. Somewhat. :P Read it, and tell me what you think. (:

Reviews

[Saddam]

Don't think your work is not great. It is, and had all element of a human life Love And Lost.
The first one, actually a very dear for any one and she/he is the part of us...
Great one dear keep it up...

[Keerthisree]

Thank you so much! I will continue writing. (: