Just

Something new I’m trying to perfect

There’s nothing left to say
Nothing left to do
But I don’t want another heart break
I’ve had enough of pain
Enough of tears
I don’t need another reason to hide my smile
So darling, I’m begging
Don’t walk away from all the glory that could be
I don’t wanna find another love
I just wanna find your love
So can you please look my way
And see someone you can’t live without
Can you overlook my flaws
And see my beauty that lives inside
Please don’t let my outer shell define me
I’m a rainbow behind the clouds
So look deeper at me
Then you’ll dream of me
And baby we can be forever

Reviews

[Katriya]

This one way love is really depressing! I hope Your wishes turn true. Well expressed poem Esther! May you find a true lover

[Susan 🦋]

I hope those clouds part and your rainbow appears. Your message conveyed in this love story on hold. Well written.

[Soren]

It is so difficult when one loves and the other does not. But remember true love does not depend on what others feel only on what we do, Well written.

[William Michael Reeves]

Perfecting a poetic form? Or love? Not wanting another love, just this love. And as a reader I look into your love for that love and hope you have it. Not just a memory of it that needs to be written.

[Esther:)]

It’s perfecting the idea of moving on, if that makes sense. It’s about getting over an old lover and now taking the chance to fall again, yet still sceptical for fear of being hurt.

[Aura]

no one wants a heartbreak but sometimes people move on. You can't ask them to change their mind, but you wish they would. A heart breaking, beautifully written piece.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

after so many years of heartbreak we certainly get tired of starting over...it gets old.
j.

[Neville]

.. although this reads like a love song .. it is indeed one of longing & sadly beautiful ...... Neville :)

[JMaster1]

Simple but beautiful poem about love
Thank you for sharing