were are you

were are you

A Poem by Estefania G. Estrada

I look up at the sky and I wonder if you're there.

I'm always in despair , mystified of were you really are.

you're in a coffin but in the sky as well.

Stay in one place so that I will no longer fear.

despair and mystified of were you are right now.

wherever you are, I hope its centered.

I will be restored when I'm not desperate no more.

I will be secure of were you are ,

when mystified I no longer will be.

I look at the sky.., and then at your grave.

I wonder were you really are.

I'm in despair and mystified.   

© 2014 Estefania G. Estrada


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DrD
Entertaining the eternal thoughts is profound and tough to tackle. I admire that you dared take it on and you did an excellent job of analyzing the questions shared by all. I am wondering, however, if you didn't mean "Where are you?" and the line "mystified of were you really are." I'm wondering if you meant "where" as well. Nicely done and I enjoyed the read.

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DrD
Entertaining the eternal thoughts is profound and tough to tackle. I admire that you dared take it on and you did an excellent job of analyzing the questions shared by all. I am wondering, however, if you didn't mean "Where are you?" and the line "mystified of were you really are." I'm wondering if you meant "where" as well. Nicely done and I enjoyed the read.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

oh this is so emotional and touching very nice

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Estefania G. Estrada
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Writing is a big part of my life, words that express deep feelings from the heart. words that play out images when you cannot explain in voice. writing is a very powerful gift that not many enjoy.. more..

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