Blaze.

Just a little poem..

Blaze.

tactical indulgences aspire improper advances;
from a certain clouded individual
too catastrophic for meager glances.
forbearance is indeed needed,
for unjustly cause is much heeded.
to look upon, the unconventional Blaze.
he simmers in rightly cause,
wrapping memories in a dirty gauze.
healing wounds so broodingly rotten
is something for the weak, which he has forgotten.
delicate manifestation of cryptic partaking,
only do subtle damage to this fiery forsaken.

Reviews

[Dillon Cotter]

"delicate manifestation of cryptic partaking,
only do subtle damage to this fiery forsaken" those lines are insane, very good writirng!

[H]

The worldplay is excellent! I really enjoy your poetry. I wish I could write this way, but I think I enjoy reading it more.

[quill of shadows]

great work nice word choice

[Kalex Cross]

Thank you both! I am so glad you liked it. And you are right chocolate. It was spur of the moment and took me two mintues tops to construct.

[PaperHearts]

Amazing! A very creative piece you have here! Your poem had effortless flow, and a great choice of vocabulary.
I loved the lines:
delicate manifestation of cryptic partaking,
only do subtle damage to this fiery forsaken.

I liked the intriguing story behind this poem, and the fact that I was able to read through it, and find my own meaning withing your piece.
Very well-written,
~PaperHearts =)

[chocolate_addict]

Wonderful wording and flow in this piece! Simply fantastic!

"he simmers in rightly cause,
wrapping memories in a dirty gauze." the emotion most of the word combinations and lines really bring about feeling in the reader.

This poem strikes me as one of those that a person writes in a spur of the moment sort of situation. So raw and touching.

:D