Norns At Noon

I dunno, I think I lost the thread. This poem feels cut short.

We sit back and snip the slack

a clip,
a blip,
an epic trip ,
a twit’s tidbit
…snip snip snip

Magic trick,
The last poker chip,
Equip
With a quip from lips
…snip snip snip

Treasure Ship
Gets a Snip
Pleasure Ship
Yep, a Snip

All fit
the Styx slip
(get a grip, it’s a myth-switch)

Can’t skip the crypt

hand-picked
and cut
to the kwick
(sic)

Snip snip snip

Reviews

[Aekmy]

Really creative. It felt bouncy, yet the message felt very serious. Wonderful.

[Siddhartha]

as always...with you it's always fun...even when it's macabre...dunno why but this kinds reminds me of sweeney todd...;)

[{A}shley {B}lack @-;-]

Loved the use of vocabulary and the flow that emits from the words used it simply rolls of your tongue very original and fun to read thank you for sharing this poem

100/100

[Dilan Gray]

This was unique and I loved your word choices. Good job.

[?]

Interesting and fun word play. loved the flow

[Ruth]

I like the word play a lot love :) Passionately written!
Great build up, surfacing and bam! lol
xx

[KAREN]

The choice of words are in this poem is different, and I loved the style and flow!

[Poetic Beauty]

This is unique and creative.

[roarke]

... so which hair didja cut?

now, on to the shears.... baaaaa baaaaaa

you know, I have no idea why I'm entertained by this... I think I'll take that shave now please...

[Linear]

Yeah you cut it short lol, snip snip, a quick slip nice trip oops I got hit by a brick. well worked right up till the kwick :o)