Complete Snippets

100% lacking details

Enough already

Ok, here we go

What’s up?

Up yours

Why would you?

Hey

What are you talking about?

Whoa

Aren’t you excited?

Ha

Take me seriously

Oh

 

Do you mind?

I don’t think so

That was thoughtful of you

Well, what do you know?

Just say the word

Just say so

What do you think about that?

Yeah, so

 

What were you thinking?

All things considered

 

Who’s to say?

Who knows?

You can’t stay

You’d better go

Take my advice

Take care

Well, well, well…

What do we have here?

Please be careful

I don’t care

Well, well, well…

Ok, that was weird.

Reviews

[Angela Mulley]

Great write, I love the flow in this poem. Well done!

[KAREN]

A great snippet write my friend! The flow was outstanding!

[Siddhartha]

Creativity is thy best friend...Love the way the poem builds up on 'complete snippets'...As if trying to accomplish order out of entropy...Great post...

[E.H. Monroe]

This was 13 conversations going on at once in the midst of a crowd and one tape recorder. It was captured in the madness of a room greeting each other. Very busy, almost scary. A lot going on and nothing got accomplished.

Nice read

[Poetic Beauty]

It is the strangest conversation I have ever eavesdropped on. I have had odd conversations with people when they weren't paying attention or just didn't care what I had to say and this poem reminds me of those times. I love the creativity that was poured into this piece.

[Apathy To Empathy]

Okay, that was so amazing!! I love your work! keep 'em comin'!!

[{A}shley {B}lack @-;-]

loved the pace and the concept of this piece your truly multi talented very well written another great read keep them coming please

[?]

and dont forget "sweeeeet"
lol
That was fun to read, enjoyed it
What a change of pace. Thanks for sharing and yes very entertaining.

[roarke]

the small talk cha-cha... and then you order another double. It is what it is man. lol
With a couple more adjective and nouns, it could be the dialogue to a Crosby/Hope Road picture....

entertaining.

[Linear]

Yes that was weird, but o so much fun to listen in on a conversation. glad thats done