This is Gibber-ish

This is gibber-ish,

just warning you.

Halfway to meaning something,

or partially saying something to

someone

who doesn’t get the point-

me in the direction of the suckers-

born every second-

hand strikes stupid.

 

Why ask:

why must there be-

more like your Mother-

who art in Heaven-

is missing an angel-

unbedeviled by the details-

is a magazine I don’t read-

in-between the lines-

I crossed, or snorted.

 

So I gave up

Just read the press-

1 for English,

your call is important-

to wash your hands before every meal.

Dollars and Sense?

Things not as they seam?

No-ish

Yes-esque

 

This is jabber-like,

blabber-like

Stumbling, mumbling,

bumbling, verse tumbling,

fumbling.  Maybe meaning:

“words with my troubles”

Empty thought bubbles

up top to a froth then

pops and says: look elsewhere.

Reviews

[Aimee Mahathy]

Hah, I like this. The last stanza was my favourite, the half rhymes are what got me. Love them!

[donella75]

Your mind is full of excellent gibberish. It is a definitely interesting piece of myriad ideas all jumbled into one great piece of work.

[dukovan]

you keep dropping into new nothings, it makes me curious, how do these thoughts connect for you? do they at all? fascinating mind, you make me want to crawl around in your mind for a while.will read more, please review some of mine. you might like "the slips"

[Siddhartha]

strange, arabesque, grotesque and yes-yesque...love it...gibberish gets me everytime...

[Poetic Beauty]

I love the play on words in this piece. Some of it is understandable and some of it not so much. It is a unique and creative piece.

[Linear]

Brought a smile to my face, gibberish eh, well write some more because I thing it's great

[KAREN]

Like a rambling poem that flows so well. Nice!

[LJW]

Enzo you brilliant f**k. How are ya and thanks for the friend invite.

[E.H. Monroe]

S**t yeah. This thing eats poems. This was three extended stanza's of utter phrases like "whatchamacallit" and "you know, its like..you know?
The Radiohead dollars and sense gives it a musical flavor, slmost saying, can't find it in song either.
Even the Chris Berman nod was tight.

This was a fun ride.
Nice work

[MuSe Ampoule]

Fun read! Very well done! I love the journey you took us through your mind,"press 1 for English your call is important" very clever in a conversational nature. Loved reading it!