Am I That Pathetic?

The truth behind their words hurt me well. I am all of those words....

 

Am I pathetic?

Am I stupid?

Am I an idiot?

Am I foolish?

 

I just wanted peace

is that pathetic?

I wanted to state my opinon

is that stupid?

 

I didn't fight back

am I an idiot?

I believe in being civil

am I foolish?

 

His words sting me well

he's right I am all of those words.

Im stupid I shouldn't be born

he convinced me at last

 

I don't have enough will power to deny,

the truth behind his words hurts me

I was in specal ed most of my life

so I must be stupid

 

I wanted peace

I want to be friendly and nice

I want people to act the same

so I must be pathetic

 

I didn't fight back with insults

I didn't throw a lick

I didn't talk with attitude

so I must be an idiot

 

I want to be a famous author

I want to write anything

I want to be free

so I must be foolish

 

I wrote a book

I'm writing anything

I wrote poems

so Im an idiot for believing

 

I believe his words now

my past shown itself

I am all of those words.

I'm discourge.

Author's Note

..im a failure

Reviews

[Emunah June.]

You're NOT a failure! Look at how you were able to take something negative and turn it into a positive. This was an incredible write full of self loathing, but that shows that you can shine, and you can shine bright. Rest assured, your words are more powerful than anything this "he" has ever told you. The pen is mightier than the sword, they say. Take the saying "if life gives you a caterpillar, make it a butterfly" to heart and walk with a head held up high, because this "he" doesn't matter at the end of the day. You are NOT a failure. God doesn't make mistakes, and you're no exception. :)

[Alicia™]

Nobody is pathetic for having dreams. We should dream big! *hugs*

[JENY]

Outpouring of discontentment…
Writing is indeed a medium for it…
Actually…writing is nothing but …expression of self…
Keep writing…

[Wake Up!]

This is a very good piece about the struggles of one's mind and the rest of the world pushing against it. Lets hope that in a later addition the author triumphs ;] im looking forward to reading more. Keep up the good work!
xoxo,
meg.

[Miss Coral]

Emotional piece.. the journey to accepting oneself and recognizing the good in oneself can be really difficult.. but it's there. I promise. c:

To critique this piece, I would suggest using consistent grammar, looking over for mistakes, and varying the wording of lines. Overall though, like I said, emotional and strong. Good job.

[RTB]

ur not foolish hahha good write keep goin ur doin great

[Joshua Donahue]

so inspirational and emotional. a very fine piece!

[OkieWonKenokie]

Awwwwe. Don't believe what he says. You ARE far from a failure. I think you're pretty cool. Although, I can relate to this myself, but mine isn't from some one cyber-bullying me. Mine is just my own thoughts and knowing I'm a failure. Don't give up. Leaving the site may help, but I understand if you wouldn't want to. The guy saying all this is just trying to make you harm yourself. It's not right but they do it. I hope you'll be fine.......I like reading your writings.

[Daydreamer54]

Snap out of it! Don't go by what the guy called you! u are more than that! Don't let him lower your self-esteem! Ur not pathetic for wanting things to change things. What u want is possible to come to pass! Don't feel discouraged! I have faith in ur abilities! You are a great writer! :)

[Lightfalls]

Please don't give up, I wish they could be blocked!