Hate Me

he is weak.

Hate me because I am
just like you:
a younger version of you,    
a more beautiful you,            
your female half,
a more courageous and wondrous you.

Hate me because
you don't love me.            
You won't allow yourself to,
because I make you        
complete.

I am a long awaited smile,
a kiss when you most need it,        
your rehabilitation,                
but you aren't coming clean
just yet.

Change me.
bring me down to your hell,    
but know that                    
I am not falling for you.

You hate yourself.
You rape yourself,        
but you don't want to feel        
at fault.

So you
blame it on me.    
Go on and hate me,        
so that you can keep all the love        
towards yourself.

Author's Note

Please let me know what you think. thank you.

Reviews

[Luci_Unveiled]

i think its great.
a very wise choice in words, which makes a poem like this easy to relate to.
great job :)

[Empirik]

This write seems so personal! I can just feel the heat of the emotion building inside you until you can not stand it anymore. This is a great way to let it out! It flows so fast as I read and speed up my reading with every line because it feels like you are saying that way. It is captivating, but really only when someone you love has hurt you so bad. I have felt this way once, and it really sucks, however Yoga was a stronger power. Nice write! :)

[The White Wolf]

I laughed, I cried, I screamed in triumph! Excuse my potty mouth but this poem is the s**t :)