Some September

Another moment gone by

People like you
don't have a name.
You wear a mask,
but i love you all the same.

The city lights dim
and fall to the sky,
like fire, like smoke
when i tell you goodbye.

Such a heartache to hold.
Such a tragedy to see.
Can you read it in my eyes?
They beg you, please, never leave.

Come and stay for a while.
Together is so much better than alone,
But you've packed up your things
and you're headed back home.

Author's Note

Please let me know what you think. Thank You

Reviews

[Zachary_James]

Loved it, it just flowed beautifully. Just loved it

[Alex Vidmar]

Beautifully written. :) I love it. Adding it to my library. :D

[Eagle Cruagh]

I think it is perfect.
It is a little hard for me to understand
but I think you are saying that the man
you have loved does not love you back.
It is hard to understand why, because
he does not commit himself.
Very well written.
---- John

[Distant horizons]

Sad,heartfelt words. Beautifully done.

[Chris]

The rhythm has serious stumbles...