This Pen Of Mine [Yes You Are (My Inspiration) Part III]

Free-verse poem. Part III of the series (3/4). Hope you like it.

This Pen Of Mine [Yes You Are (My Inspiration) Part III]
-Epilogue ErrSix

Now, I just want to tell you, who you are in my eyes;
Maybe you can't believe what I'm talking about, it has no lies.
I've found you because of this pen;
Knew and loved you because of this pen.

I'll gave thanks because I had this pen.
I'm lucky because of this, we'll meet again.
Upon the first time that we've met and talked;
I never wanted to stop the time, but I want to have the talk!

Everything in front of my table seems to work fine;
Because of you, my life is now a straight line.
Because of your beautiful smiles,
I could express my talents and touch lives.

Author's Note

This is a free-verse poem. Please post your suggestions to help me enhance this.

Reviews

[Jason]

I don't really know how to tell you to enhance this....for I believe this just flows wonderful from beginning to end. It is your creation, your "child", so to speak, and it is totally beautiful. I really enjoyed reading this. Thank you for sharing.

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Wow another great inspirational writing.. flowing right from the heart.. I could never change the words of divine love written from the heart of a poet.. (tried that once or twice before but then felt terrible about it).. see the words are true to your heart!!! Love this message.. hopefully you can touch many souls with a radiant light .. take the darkness away for even a soul or two.. if everyone did this it could change the world.. laugh.. it's ok.. corny but true!!! The more I see darkness now the more I want to fight it.. with love and light.. peace and surrender!!! Your pen found an admiration..how simply divine!!!! Must be a brilliant writer who could promote such a happening!!! Thank you again for sharing your inspiration.. I'm inspired!!! =)