New Life

My first entry on my "Loving Poetry" Notebook.

New Life

-Epilogue ErrSix

 

 

New Life! This new breath of mine starts the dawn of a new day,

The sun is rising, the birds are flying, and the skies are blue and not gray!

As I move to see the beautiful rise of the morning sun,

I looked back to the past, I waved goodbye to the irony of fun.

 

And those flowers that dance with the wind,

Says that I have something to find;

I’ll just leave my dark past behind,

Because new life is what I’ve found!

 

New Life! Can’t you see how it flows?

From the mountains then to the shores!

I’ll just leave my dark past behind,

Because new life is what I’ve found!

 

Thanks to the ones who made me grow;

To all my endeavors, it’s all of you I owe!

Because of your help, you made me strive,

To strive for the dawn of my new life!

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

There seems to be something wrong or something lacking on my poem, and I don't know what's that. Reviews are welcome to help me improve my works.