The Lightbeam

A free-verse poem. More poems and stories soon to follow.

The Lightbeam

-Epilogue ErrSix

 

 

It’s every corner made me blind;

It’s every corner made me kind.

It’s every corner made me feel,

It’s every corner made me dear.

 

 

It was the light beam who shown me,

 

The importance of your beauty to thee.

It was the light beam who helped me,

To make my life good like this poetry.

 

 

I’ll wrote a poem for you, even tough you’re far;

 

Over the hills and the whole of those myriad stars

Everyone will hear what I will state.

 

 

You are my light beam, you are my inspiration

 

I know it would be easy if you do evasion

Now that I’m used to experience rejection.

 

 

But before you leave me, my lovely light beam;

 

I’ll love you like this constant thing,

Like this light beam in front of me.

Author's Note

This is a free-verse poem. Please post your suggestions to help me enhance this.

Reviews

[H.Y]

"every corner made me blind;
every corner made me kind.
every corner made me feel,
every corner made me dear.

The light beam showed me,
The importance of your beauty.
It was the light beam who helped me
To make my life good, like poetry.

for you a poem I'll write, tough you are far;
Over the hills and the whole of the myriad stars
Everyone will hear what I state.
You are my light beam, my muse"

lol, ive been editing my own stuff alot lately so its a habbit to edit stuff. hope this helps a little. ^^

[Jaeda]

It's kind of like a love letter, but awesome as a free verse poem.