Creature of Delight

Creature of Delight

A Poem by ErosNthanatos
"

You worship for my pleasure

"
Spicy scent of a sensual promise,

Air kisses, mouth playing in the shilouette,

Eyes are dark, pools of drowning fiery desire,

The sound of your breathing,

A capturing magical spell,

caught I am willingly in this tangled web.

Hard firm flesh and skin burning,

In peachy fair of deliscious color.

This creature of pleasure worshipped me.

I became the beauty Aphrodite between the sheets.

© 2013 ErosNthanatos


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Hushed whispers breathe out such soft music of desire and delight. Each scent and sound and sensual touch is perfectly etched on the mind and body. Surely we were made for such ecstasy. xo

Posted 11 Years Ago


ErosNthanatos

3 Years Ago

In synced in the moment and person, yes.
Such sweet descriptions of sensual pleasure. I appreciate your skill since i sometimes write that genre as well.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ErosNthanatos

3 Years Ago

Enjoy writing such delights and escapes
Just catching my breath. Oh my! Everything here is simply enchanted music that dances in the mind.. a wild wonder! The scene unfolds in sweetest desires.

Posted 11 Years Ago


ErosNthanatos

11 Years Ago

Desire is the name
To enslave is the game :)
Is it bad that I want a woman who knows this particular spell?

Enticing stuff Eros!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ErosNthanatos

11 Months Ago

Thank you for your kind words
I love the description and flow of this piece, I can see what you mean. ''In peachy fair of delicious color'' is a brilliant line. You write with a more old fashioned sense of things, and that's great. Reminds me of some of the great poets like Walt Whitmen or Robert Frost. Keep up the good work!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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ErosNthanatos

11 Years Ago



Ahh... They are on their own stature already in the stratosphere. I just write for ple.. read more
Oooo la la!
You have clearly captured a pleasant vision...okay, more than pleasant, absolutely delicious!
Nicely done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


ErosNthanatos

11 Years Ago

We have something in common that we share...delicious is the right word my friend ;)
Tantalizing picture you've painted here, lovely last line. Nicely pen'd this one.

Posted 11 Years Ago


ErosNthanatos

11 Years Ago

Thank you Jersey
An intellectually sensual tease... we all need some naughtiness to keep us sane in this crazy world.

Posted 11 Years Ago


ErosNthanatos

11 Years Ago

A dash or a sprinkle will do.
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

11 Years Ago

:)

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ErosNthanatos
ErosNthanatos

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I breath a not so very fresh air I consume a not so healthy diet I sleep under the same stars I gaze under the same moon I see, hear, feel, and smell the scents I process the stimulants and cha.. more..

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