I want to take you (Love poem #4)

love poetry

I want to take you

 to all the places
  you dreamt of going

Side by side
 the view shimmering
  the wind blowing

 

to hold your hand in mine
like this, for the rest of time

 

I want to give you
 all that shines and glitters
  endless surprises

I want to hold you
 our arms intertwined;
  eternal sunrises

without words or thoughts, just bliss
to be like this: my wish, my wish

Author's Note

hey guys. i just had a psychotic episode! i will try to get back to everyone very soon, but i just need a few days to recover. here's a love poem i wrote a while ago.

Reviews

[Lorry]

A pretty darn good way to wake up (the poem, not the episode)
That leaves me thinking that no matter how cold the day is, it might just be filled with sunshine.
Hope you feel better now.... I don't believe in all that get well soon, so get well now!
😃

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

thanks Lorry. reading these comments have been very encouraging. appreciate your support always.
read morethanks Lorry. reading these comments have been very encouraging. appreciate your support always.

Ern.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

a love poem displaying such unselfishness.
j.

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

thank you so much

[ETERNITY]

Ern, Please tell me if I can do "anything" to help.
Love Always, G

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

thanks Glenda. if you read my work, that means everything to me.

[Chris Shaw]

Tender words of love for a significant other. Simply but wonderfully expressed and the delight and happiness comes through. A lovely poem. Get well soon Ern.

Chris

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

thanks Chris. it's sweet and a bit cliche but i couldn't help but share it. have a great day!

Ern.

[Dave W.]

Ern feel better my dude, also this poem was great.

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

thanks Dave. always appreciate your support. have a good day!