I want to take you (Love poem #4)

love poetry

I want to take you

 to all the places
  you dreamt of going

Side by side
 the view shimmering
  the wind blowing

 

to hold your hand in mine
like this, for the rest of time

 

I want to give you
 all that shines and glitters
  endless surprises

I want to hold you
 our arms intertwined;
  eternal sunrises

without words or thoughts, just bliss
to be like this: my wish, my wish

Author's Note

hey guys. i just had a psychotic episode! i will try to get back to everyone very soon, but i just need a few days to recover. here's a love poem i wrote a while ago.

Reviews

[Lorry]

A pretty darn good way to wake up (the poem, not the episode)
That leaves me thinking that no matter how cold the day is, it might just be filled with sunshine.
Hope you feel better now.... I don't believe in all that get well soon, so get well now!
😃

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

thanks Lorry. reading these comments have been very encouraging. appreciate your support always.
read morethanks Lorry. reading these comments have been very encouraging. appreciate your support always.

Ern.

[Amy R]

What a beautiful wish, so full of lovely intentions. Soon it'll be easy for you to do when you meet her. ;)

I hope you are recovering well, sorry about that. Take care Ern, my friend.

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

thanks Amy. your approval means a lot! i took a few days off and im doing a bit better. look forward to seeing you again.

[Amy R]

You're welcome, that's good you're doing better ...

[ETERNITY]

Your Romantica is always salve for the heart. You always write of such loving ways to serve your lover. It just touches my heart always, Ern.

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

thanks Glenda. i hope it stirred a bit of romance in your life :D

[MrBlack202]

Well written poem, I lovely how you expressed the desires of the heart and all the romance in between.

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

thank you!

[Eilis]

This is a touching expression of love. The desire to set the self aside or become one with the lover through fulfilling their needs and desires is a beautiful way of manifesting the internal fulfillment of loving someone deeply.

I like the surprise of the poem alongside the title which denotes a physical idea, but we find it’s a fragment of the idea expressed. There is a sense in the images that the speaker and the lover are in a private universe and that heightens the expression. As though loving someone deeply can make the outer world disappear. A lovely expression of fulfillment in connection.

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

thank you so much. you really felt the layers of this work, i'm glad.

[Sami Khalil]

Delighted to read, delightful to think of. Romance is the underlying currents of felt love.
Wow!

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

than you!!!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome Ern.

[Neville]

There is no doubt about it my friend .. this is indeed a love poem & it gets a well deserved 👍from me .. Oh' and get well soon okay .. Neville

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

thanks Neville. reading these comments make me feel better!

[Neville]

write on brother Ern ..

[Marie]

This romantic, warm, sweet, tender poetic gem unveils true, pure, genuine love and caring for someone so special. This is the kind of unselfish love that everyone needs in their life. I am so very happy you are feeling very much better now, Ern. Take very good care of you, keep well, dear friend. A wonderful write! So enjoyed reading and Thank you! for sharing...

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

thanks Marie. this as written with an intention of giving yourself up totally, and i'm glad it resonated.

Ern.

[Marie]

Most welcome always, dear Ern...

[LisaCarol]

Very touching love poem. I really liked it.

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

thanks Lisa!

[Miss Marlette]

Oh wow. A psychotic's love poem! It could be fun writing it.

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

i'm crazy in more than one way xD

[Vol]

Ern,
You know, Ern, your name in Em nglish is "sea eagle,' andI fing =d tht pretty damn ool. More people should have that as their name.
I have been where your poem says to go. I hae had love like that. it is the THE thing ablout life, it is THE hope of everyone, to hoave a love so deep and powerful that nothing in hman experience is of any significance by comparison.
Good stuff, and why no one wants to die.
Vol

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

i am very glad you related to this poem. i hope everyone gets to feel this way once in their life.read morei am very glad you related to this poem. i hope everyone gets to feel this way once in their life.
and thanks for the facts about my name. i didn't know that!