I want to take you (Love poem #4)

love poetry

I want to take you

 to all the places
  you dreamt of going

Side by side
 the view shimmering
  the wind blowing

 

to hold your hand in mine
like this, for the rest of time

 

I want to give you
 all that shines and glitters
  endless surprises

I want to hold you
 our arms intertwined;
  eternal sunrises

without words or thoughts, just bliss
to be like this: my wish, my wish

Author's Note

hey guys. i just had a psychotic episode! i will try to get back to everyone very soon, but i just need a few days to recover. here's a love poem i wrote a while ago.

Reviews

[Lorry]

A pretty darn good way to wake up (the poem, not the episode)
That leaves me thinking that no matter how cold the day is, it might just be filled with sunshine.
Hope you feel better now.... I don't believe in all that get well soon, so get well now!
😃

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

thanks Lorry. reading these comments have been very encouraging. appreciate your support always.
read morethanks Lorry. reading these comments have been very encouraging. appreciate your support always.

Ern.

[Thomas W Case]

Stay safe. Powerful writing. I hope it's cathartic.

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

thank you. i think all my writing kind of explodes out of me, this vertainly was one of them.

[Yahya Oulad Aouid]

Fantastic poem Mr. Yoshimoto! Heartfelt words from a man who's enveloped by his passion, vulnerable yet incredibly solid! Thank you for sharing.

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

thanks mate. im glad you vibed with this. hope to see you again soon.

[Stella Armour]

No words are needed when two loving souls are together, it goes without saying the trust and affection between them doesn't need to be spoken ...

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

thank you Stella for your beautiful comment. i concur. words might give you closure, but it's not everything.

[Starr]

Such a wonderful write, so lovely.

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

thanks Starr!

[Ken Simm.]

Yes, just yes. A beautiful poem on the beauty of love.

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

thanks Kim. sorry i missed your comment. it makes me very happy that you came and read my work. as always,

Ern.

[Pete]

quite sweet. touching to say the least. love is not an easy thing to express and talk about.

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

thanks Pete. gad you stopped by. sorry forthe late reply.

Ern.

[Aarti Sriram]

Sure receipe and attitude, a lover would want in a relationship. This is almost what a lover will need from their partner. Good luck and glittery times : ) dear @ Ern

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

thank you. sorry for the late reply, but finally reading your comment has brightened my day.

[John the Baptist]

Sounds like something meant for a special person. A lot of feeling skillfully conveyed. Best wishes for your recovery. Those diseases are very troublesome, but in my working days I knew many people who dealt with them successfully.

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

thanks John. glad you stopped by. i am doing a bit better, thanks for asking. took a few days off but im getting back into reading again.

[Soren]

I think that we all have had feelings like this at one time or another for someone. Feelings that at the time we could not express. You have done very well to put them down in words that convey the message of love. Love is giving and this seems to be your wish. Most beautifully expressed.

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

yes, its a cheeky little poem but it came from a place of honesty. a little bit surprised to hear that you could relate to this. (perhaps you have a sweet side only a few know? haha). have a good one. see you around

[Amy R]

What a beautiful wish, so full of lovely intentions. Soon it'll be easy for you to do when you meet her. ;)

I hope you are recovering well, sorry about that. Take care Ern, my friend.

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

thanks Amy. your approval means a lot! i took a few days off and im doing a bit better. look forward to seeing you again.

[Amy R]

You're welcome, that's good you're doing better ...