You are beautiful (Love poem#1)

You are beautiful.

Beautiful.

All-consuming,

Graceful.

You consume the room
 as you stroll in.

You steal the stars
from the sky
   and the light
    within.

I am your man, your groom
 and you -- my moon,
  the sand, the water,
   my before, my after.

Here I die
on this cold summer’s night.

I love you,

and love you.

Fondly. Sincerely.

May you live
forever

my gem, my treasure.

 

 

2024.

Author's Note

part of a series i'll be doing on love poems.

Reviews

[Marie]

Wow! This beautiful love poem wound its way straight into my heart! So warm and sweet and very finely crafted. Love the visual detail within the poem which shows the reader how much your love means to you. Your beloved is so sublimely addressed in this masterful and very heartwarming poem! Lovely work! SO enjoyed reading and thank you for sharing, Ern...

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

thanks Marie. i'm glad you liked it. it's not as dark as the other things i write. this is part of a series so make sure you wear your heart on your sleeve this week.

[Pryde Foltz]

Gorgeous. I think any woman would be thrilled to have these words spoken to her in poetry:)

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

i hope so...

[barf]

Truly beautiful. A love so unconditional you cannot help but write about it. Undeniably well written.

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

wouldn't say unconditional, but it was deep and crazy haha. thanks for the review

[Sami Khalil]

I love it! It was so romantic and effective.
Your readers can see your romantic side. I like the repetition.
Kudos!

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

thank you!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome Ern.

[Dave W.]

Yeah man, this was great sir, well written, thank you for sharing.

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

thank you!