You are beautiful (Love poem#1)

You are beautiful.

Beautiful.

All-consuming,

Graceful.

You consume the room
 as you stroll in.

You steal the stars
from the sky
   and the light
    within.

I am your man, your groom
 and you -- my moon,
  the sand, the water,
   my before, my after.

Here I die
on this cold summer’s night.

I love you,

and love you.

Fondly. Sincerely.

May you live
forever

my gem, my treasure.

 

 

2024.

Author's Note

part of a series i'll be doing on love poems.

Reviews

[Gee]

It is so very hard to put into words the depth of love one feels for another but you sir have managed to do that, and more, in this beautifully written piece.

[Neville]

This is indeed a love poem & without doubt inspired by such intensity of said emotion .. much loved .. Neville

[JustJulie]

Hmm...Strong love.. ..passion and love light shines through this.

[John the Baptist]

I ask you, what woman could resist such words?

[Soren]

Such a revelation and pledge of love that is most poetically stated and reveals the depth of the emotion. Very nicely done Ern

[Thomas W Case]

Such a beautiful picture. Tremendous work.

[MrBlack202]

Beautiful poem, as it speaks to the heart.

[Coyote Poetry]

So beautiful, so wonderful Ern. You promised a love that will always be.
"I love you,
and love you.
Fondly. Sincerely.
May you live
forever
my gem, my treasure."
The above lines. Could stand alone. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry for love.
Coyote

[Marie]

Wow! This beautiful love poem wound its way straight into my heart! So warm and sweet and very finely crafted. Love the visual detail within the poem which shows the reader how much your love means to you. Your beloved is so sublimely addressed in this masterful and very heartwarming poem! Lovely work! SO enjoyed reading and thank you for sharing, Ern...

[Amy R]

Oh my heart, what a lovely love poem.
It's so heart warming to read.❤❤ I am excited to see the rest of your "love" poems
Thanks for sharing.
-Amy