Dear readers, sorry i've been absent. i love reading your works and leaving comments. i love this community. but there is A LOT going on right now, and i can't focus. but i'll be back again soon as things settle down. i look forward to that time i can focus, read and enjoy your poetry and stories, and share my thoughts with you.
On the poem: usually, i do not like to write dogmatically. but, this is something i have been thinking about recently and i decided to share what i have learned. artistically, i hate this piece. but i hope the message resonates with some people.
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I had something close to trauma. But not really trauma.
do not give into the temptation
of abandoning all hope.
I think, I had survived is what matters really, over everything.
To give up hope is truly tempting. But do not forsake your only lifeline. It was what had carried us this far. Right?
Just because it may had been "over". We still need to cherish our hope. thank you.
Thank you. Can you tell this to your friends.
Posted 4 Months Ago
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
4 Months Ago
trauma is something that prevents us from living fully. it is not about how "bad" it is. suppose you.. read moretrauma is something that prevents us from living fully. it is not about how "bad" it is. suppose you know someone who has had it worse than you. doesn't make your hurt go away.
so, i wrote this poem for you as well. read it again if you like. i mean every word of it. --Ern
I had something close to trauma. But not really trauma.
do not give into the temptation
of abandoning all hope.
I think, I had survived is what matters really, over everything.
To give up hope is truly tempting. But do not forsake your only lifeline. It was what had carried us this far. Right?
Just because it may had been "over". We still need to cherish our hope. thank you.
Thank you. Can you tell this to your friends.
Posted 4 Months Ago
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
4 Months Ago
trauma is something that prevents us from living fully. it is not about how "bad" it is. suppose you.. read moretrauma is something that prevents us from living fully. it is not about how "bad" it is. suppose you know someone who has had it worse than you. doesn't make your hurt go away.
so, i wrote this poem for you as well. read it again if you like. i mean every word of it. --Ern
Wonderful inspiration poem. Great to read in the morning. I was particularly struck by the last verse.
Live life beautifully
so every cell in your body
cries out in ecstasy.
But never leave your post.
You are a warrior.
The world needs you.
On another note: that poem I said you inspired is up. Ready to talk more spiders. Be sure to drop by and drop me a comment to know what you thought:) Thank you, Ern:)
Posted 5 Months Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
4 Months Ago
your poems inspire me as well, and i will be sure to check out your latest post. glad we had this co.. read moreyour poems inspire me as well, and i will be sure to check out your latest post. glad we had this connection here, my fellow warrior.
Life can be tough and to be a survivor under trauma and abuse must be very hard. Unfathomable to many of us complaining about little things in an easy life. Nice and simple poem but strong and true.
@yohsimoto, May you sit in peace soon with your loved ones around and take time out to read/write in joy and lose yourself in your happy world.
Well said, Ern. I would trust you can leave your post when needed. A warrior needs rest, and generosity of spirit includes letting others do and act in your stead.
Posted 5 Months Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
5 Months Ago
thank you for the comment. i hope one day we can enter retirement knowing we did all we could.
I really love this write, so inspiring.
love the last two lines so much.
Amazing write!
Posted 5 Months Ago
5 Months Ago
thank you Nora Jade. i tried to express everything i wanted to tell people in this piece and i'm ver.. read morethank you Nora Jade. i tried to express everything i wanted to tell people in this piece and i'm very happy you took the time to read it.
Ernest Lalor Malley Yoshimoto
Bipolar type II
Writes poetry, some free verse, and experimental short fiction/novellas. From Western Australia, based in Saitama City, Japan.
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