Get Out

Get Out

A Poem by ~Wandering Soul~
"

I have never moved and i just feel like i need to get started I just need to GET OUT there

"

Wake up
Get out
It still looks like yesterday
The sky is blue
So why's it looking kind of grey
As I pass by buildings
and parked cars on the street

 

 

I know it's not me moving
They move around me
Cause I havn't moved
and inch in years

 

I feel the need
to move on out
It's twisting through me
like the need to shout
Mindless freedom
my feet glued in place
don't think that getting out of here
is some kind of race

 

Please dont think I'm trying to leave you
I'm just trying to see something new

 

 

midday
lunch time
It's all set to perfect schedule
Follow nothing
Like the carrot and the mule
Always close but out of reach
I'll only ever get to dream it

 

 

I know it's not me moving
They move around me
Cause I havn't moved
and inch in years

 

I feel the need
to move on out
It's twisting through me
like the need to shout
Mindless freedom
my feet glued in place
don't think that getting out of here
is some kind of race

 

 

Please dont think I'm trying to leave you
I'm just trying to see something new

 

I know it's not me moving
They move around me
Cause I havn't moved
and inch in years

 

 

Morning looked the same as tomorrow
Each day in one place I feel more hollow

 

I feel the need
to move on out
It's twisting through me
like the need to shout
Mindless freedom
my feet glued in place
don't think that getting out of here
is some kind of race

 

Please dont think I'm trying to leave you
I'm just trying to see something new

 

 

I know it's not me moving
They move around me
Cause I havn't moved
and inch in years

 

I need to move
get out
I need to move
get out
get out
oneday get out

© 2009 ~Wandering Soul~


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That's a complete song with amazing chorus and great verses!!
I liked it a lot. Just reading through it gave me a feeling that I need more space. You really put down your thoughts into words very well. It's like thumping on my screen, the powerful poem of yours.
A great start, and a great end...
The poem/song talks about need to see new things in life. Life can be as well as dead if lived as monotonous and boring. New things keep the spirit alive, that's what I feel...
Well Done!! Keep it up!! ;)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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That's a complete song with amazing chorus and great verses!!
I liked it a lot. Just reading through it gave me a feeling that I need more space. You really put down your thoughts into words very well. It's like thumping on my screen, the powerful poem of yours.
A great start, and a great end...
The poem/song talks about need to see new things in life. Life can be as well as dead if lived as monotonous and boring. New things keep the spirit alive, that's what I feel...
Well Done!! Keep it up!! ;)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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~Wandering Soul~
~Wandering Soul~

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I'm a 20 year old girl from Australia who has always had a passion for writing. It's my way of explaining things that I can't put to words - I write. I'm studying nursing at the moment so that in a.. more..

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