Holding Out

Holding Out

A Poem by ~Wandering Soul~
"

just someting I wrote

"

I look around
for something for my hands to do
but there is nothing
only nothing


I look to the clock
to find the time is still the same
cause time is frozen
just frozen

 


and its all the same
the sun rises then it sets
and its just a game
so just place all your bets


casue I am stuck here
not moving anywhere
just holding out for light


hold out for me

 


I see darkness
even when all the lights are on
there's so much evil
such evil


I see so much pain
through every strangers smile
cause we're all dying
we're dying

 


and its all the same
the sun rises then it sets
and its just a game

so just place all your bets


casue I am stuck here
not moving anywhere
just holding out for light


hold out for me
hold out for me
hold out
for
me

 


I hear thunder
it gets louder with each flash
as lightning strikes
lightning strike


I feel the rain
wash away all our mistakes
cause we were all wrong
all wrong

 


and its all the same
the sun rises then it sets
and its just a game
so just place all your bets


casue I am stuck here
not moving anywhere
just holding out for light


just hold out for me

© 2009 ~Wandering Soul~


Author's Note

~Wandering Soul~
what do you think this means to you?
and what do you think of this as a piece of writting
thankyou in advance

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It just means to me you're on a tough path. Nothing looks good on the path you're on. Everyday is a repeat of the last. A clear sign of depression. I've been there. There's more to this than that. I'm pulling for you. Rain..

Posted 16 Years Ago


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~Wandering Soul~
~Wandering Soul~

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I'm a 20 year old girl from Australia who has always had a passion for writing. It's my way of explaining things that I can't put to words - I write. I'm studying nursing at the moment so that in a.. more..

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