BLOOD

just feeling a little bit down during lunch so i let it out and this is just one of the three i wrote 2day

Brilliant red of the

Life that flows through me

One day to slow its pace

Overflow to the floor

Down; I will fall.

Reviews

[James Hall]

Cheer Up.

Good Poem though.

[Lestat's daughter]

Oooh, I got shivers! I love it!

[Poeticpiers]

Well done acrostic although a little pessimistic.