Nothing Left

thoughts from me basically

no happy ending ever existed
for happiness is a part of the mind
hurtful memories revisited
and its now hope i wont ever find
 
carefully placed smiles everday
lies of my sanity, the lie that im fine
my heart rips, the pain held at bay
you hurt me,though the fault was mine
 
hidden feelings, of a world without me
you know of, but wont see these tears
blinded by anger you wont ever see
i now bring life to all your fears
 

Reviews

[Blade & Blood (The ..]

This is a sad poem, but it was also very deep. I have no hesitation in assuming that this must be a personal poem.

Structurally, a couple broken threw me off, but that's fine because the rhyming and the tone was really good. I admire how it came from the heart.

Ironically Yours, -Blade and Blood

[Bhavya Kaushik]

This is sad! Really so sad and full of pain , I loved the closing section the most!
Very raw and so full of emotions it is...Great work!

[Imperfection]

Honest and sincere. Like you've held nothing back.
I was taken in right from the beginning.
Very powerful expressions. The words have flown from a wounded heart...and I believe that's what creates the best poetry.

Amazing write.

[budzushammer]

This holds most intense feeling in such a small space.... great writing! Concider sending this to our submissions box for our editors to review and possible publish! www.budzushammer.com

-The Budzu Crew

[justink :):)]

WOW i realy liked it the first line is realy powerful......it was also very deep.

hope to read more justintime

[Captain Blackheart (The..]

This poem has a very sad feel to it, the first line is really powerful.......You write dark stuff really well, I hope one day you will turn to writting something with hapiness or joy in it. You have the talent if you choose to do so...

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

A very good writing that does express one's hopes and fears. Hope you feel better and keep writing. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

[Gary H]

For me the final line shows hope and a fighting message. I think the start of the poem about the no happy ending gives feeling that the following lines are lost in feelings of despair. On believing that two people are in a relationship, I'm shocked to see the 'fault' just being admitted by one. No-one is perfect.
Reads as a very brave and personal write.