DECISION

DECISION


You're sparkling eyes show me the path to my destined place
My heart says it will go where ever you will go to
My bones wish to walk by your side forever
My skin need to feel you near and caressing me like never before
All these push me right next to you just like the magnetic force on the earth


But my mind won't hear them cuz it knows what is best for me
And this is to stay apart
You have a control on me that should be suppressed
Then which one should i here to?
My urge to be with him OR what is right for me?
My desires OR my common sense?
Which one to choose?

Reviews

[matrixmark]

The feeling of wanting to spend the rest of your life with someone is so so special. But the knowing part is more difficult to work out. I love the way in which this piece is worded - its full of desire, yet at the same time asks the question 'do i or dont i'.

Intriguin piece but also has a valid point.

Good work.

Mark.