Oh my goodness, Erik. This was perfect. Every single word. Not only does it show how amazing He really is, but it also shows how much He cares for us. You are definitely blessed with the talent of writing. Never ever give it up. I know God has big things in store for you. :)
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Haha. Thank you. Means a lot to hear that from an incredible writer like you.
You're welcome...hmm mine doesn't say dayspring do you mean the rising sun part? And I think the Ove.. read moreYou're welcome...hmm mine doesn't say dayspring do you mean the rising sun part? And I think the Overseer of our souls would sound better, but that's my opinion. You did a good job though and I enjoyed it, it reminded me of some good songs I have heard with these names within them.
10 Years Ago
It is the King James Version. My personal Bible says the same as yours.
10 Years Ago
xD oh I see, I'm not familiar with all the versions I guess
So many beautiful words describing our Friend,yet it still feels like we are just at the tip of the iceberg....For what He did,no man can ever attempt...and His ways,our minds can't phantom...His love is forever and His mercies are renewed every morning...we are nothing but worthless and empty without Him and before your throne we humble ourselves,Our king....Erik Daniel,that is a wonderful poem....
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Well thank you kindly. Glad you liked it! To God be the glory!
I've been using writing as an outlet for the stress and anger of life since I was a kid. More just freestyle or creative writing than anything. I let my feelings guide me more..