There's still quite a bit I have to learn, as this is my first time writing out of school, but ignoring any grammatical errors some feedback would be highly appreciated.
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Thank you for the kind words on "A Blackened Mind." It's neat when someone else sees what you see.
I was curious as to whether the shape of your poem was intentional or not. I'm assuming so. It's really
a nice touch as the silhouette is missing her head-out of reach you could say which strengthens the piece and grounds the last line.
For myself I've found that writing sonnets helps me structure my poetry and taught me a lot in the beginning. Spenserian Sonnets specifically.
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
No problem, I completely agree with you about hearing others' input. Believe it or not the shape wa.. read moreNo problem, I completely agree with you about hearing others' input. Believe it or not the shape was actually not intentional, just highly ironic. I can venture to guess that by your vocabulary you are a more accomplished writer than me lol. I am actually 12 and just starting of so I really appreciate any input. Thank you :)
Thank you for the kind words on "A Blackened Mind." It's neat when someone else sees what you see.
I was curious as to whether the shape of your poem was intentional or not. I'm assuming so. It's really
a nice touch as the silhouette is missing her head-out of reach you could say which strengthens the piece and grounds the last line.
For myself I've found that writing sonnets helps me structure my poetry and taught me a lot in the beginning. Spenserian Sonnets specifically.
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
No problem, I completely agree with you about hearing others' input. Believe it or not the shape wa.. read moreNo problem, I completely agree with you about hearing others' input. Believe it or not the shape was actually not intentional, just highly ironic. I can venture to guess that by your vocabulary you are a more accomplished writer than me lol. I am actually 12 and just starting of so I really appreciate any input. Thank you :)
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