Would You?

A simple little love poem.

If I held out my hand,

and sung out your name,

would your feet dance to me,

so we could dance in purple rain?

 

Would you spin with me,

until we collapsed,

In the field with the lonely tree,

where the bunnies play in trash scraps?

 

Would you care,

that sometimes, I get a little crazy?

That my hold on reality gets hazy?

That sometimes, all I want is to sit and laugh in feild  overflowing with daisies?

 

Would you sing with me,

in perfect harmony?

Allow Our souls and hearts to blend into one

and sometimes bask, with me, in the warmth of the sun?

 

Would you hold my hand,

and try to teach me

that love isn't something

that's meant to come easy?

 

Would we play,

like young hearts

but have much

more meaningful things to say?

 

And when we ran out of words,

would you feel at ease?

Would you understand that I

don't always need your words to be pleased?

 

Because I just need you there, sitting next to me.

Growing old on the colonial porch as we drink Ice tea.

Hold my hand, kiss my cheek?

Prove that love is something we, too, can keep?

Reviews

[Deviant Works]

This is adorable. I am glad you mentioned "play" along with all the other wonderful things. Most couples don't realize how wonderful it is to laugh and play together. Don't realize it can keep them young, alive and madly in love. Great poem.:D

[darkgurl]

I enjoyed the sincerity of this well written write.

[Tom]

This is so cute and full of love

[Alicia™]

Aww, this is so sweet! Ah, the beauty of love… I liked the simplicity of the poem, and I think that the length of it is just nice. One thing though; you should capitalize the first letter of every line.

Great job!