dyeing love.

dyeing love.

A Poem by Erica

I loved you more then anything.
You threw it back in my face without a second thought.
Never thought i could hurt this much.
Before you i was lost.
You saved me from the hurt, and darkness.
But you could never love me the way i loved you. 
No matter what i did, you let me die all over again.

© 2013 Erica


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Erica
Please review this and tell me what you really think. I will take all the criticism you have for me.

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"You threw it back in my face without a second thought.

Never thought i could hurt this much.

Before you i was lost.

You saved me from the hurt, and darkness."

Very real and relatable to so many people. Thank you for sharing...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Dye
How very sad. There is nothing worse than feeling rescued only to find out the one rescuing is no better than the rest. As far a review, I think you got the message through clearly.

Posted 11 Years Ago


A very sad write of love lost and a broken heart...something that only time can heal...Rose

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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