Dance

This is one of my less dark ones.

Eyes shut lightly. Lips together. Her hair flowing quietly behind her, the dark brown, color matching the thin cloth wrapped over her breast and down her body. THe rest of it flowing with her hair behind her. Her feet pointed down. Spinning on her pointed feet, round and round. Arms pulled in towards her chest. Shallow breathing through her nose. Peacefully spinning, nothing to worry about. Not one single thought in her mind. Everything in this one moment was gone. Just her on a stage spinning, alone, peacefully, quietly.

Reviews

[Riya Rashmi]

This is so beautiful :) There is no need for the reader to imagine anything as you've brought it all out so vividly. This is a peaceful dance of words. Thank you for sharing this poem :)

[Frieda P]

Beautiful imagery, I can see this tiny dancer spinning on your page, very lovely read.

[Lucien Maier]

Very discriptive, and a nice insight into a dancers head.
I would have one sentence per line as it would break up the flow a bit better IMHO

[Sami Khalil]

A very descriptive poem. I hope you get more reviews...:)

[Erica]

Thanks very much

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)