Empty

-Outside, you are happy, fun, joyful, dwelling, and funny. Truthfully, the inside is gone. Empty, no feeling, no love, no pain, not helping.

Reviews

[Rahul]

I really don't think that it's a poem, it's a great thoughts with which we all're damn familiar but don't think about it. Your this piece came form your heart and it's really a nice one. I've read your "ABOUT ME"...your that first line's all great and also familiar with all..."life's been filled with all kinda stress" i do agree...but you saw only at and from one side..the IInd side of life's ..."life's been already filled with joy: not inner, not outsider" it's we who make the difference of insider and outsider...isn't it...?
yeah, i do agree that "to release from stress writing's best option for all one...including me, you and all.

this piece put me aside by my work and forces me to think about it daily, everyday ...after awake, before sleep and before do anything..that's a great msg especially to me indeed.
liked this piece and i think you deserve to get this 101/100.

[Erica]

Thank you. I am glad you like it.

[Dean Kuch®]

A hollow mussels shell, all life sucked out by the gluttony of humanity. Yeah, I frequently feel this way...

[Half Dream]

I know this feeling! Short yet powerful. :)