Drift

-Sitting in a chair, in the middle of a room. Four walls, a ceiling and a floor. Black, no color. The air thin, brutally cold. Wind swirling in a tornado the ceiling, then everything stops. The feather floats back down onto the chair, no movement.

Reviews

[Rahul]

This write can be apply on both one's "on birds and on humans"...because birds've already got their wings, feather but humans' don't. Humans always wish to fly and want freedom alike some birds and only and only this drift somehow helps them to fly and move forward to touch the sky without stopping.
as a bird somehow feels tiredness after a long flight man needs the same a rest after a long working hours...everything has two ends one's "starting and other one's ending" alike same life;s also got two ends
one's "life and other one's death"...so, why we can't live our life in a way we want, why we can't live our life freely alike freedom as what we want because life's one and we gotta live' life's first pole that's "life" until we reach on the IInd end that's "death"..!

your this write again makes me crazy to read youse all writings because i'm seeing some kinda truthness in your writings...and this piece conveys me to write my own one write on it...yeah you can say that this piece's being inspiring me writing and making one my own piece what i think on it...
glad to read youse work, hopefull, i'm not wasting my time in youse piece's afterall i'm getting and awaking my inner soul how's life, what's life and how i can, we can see life not only from one end but from life's both ends...

this piece again a great one...and if i give you this 100/100, so this'd be insult of youse this piece, so, your this writing doesn't contain any cost because it's costless and very expensive if anyone read it from heart as i did...so, this time i want to give my my *Hug* for this piece..."tight hug* :)