"Poetic Impression"

It is a lot like a photo-copier, or is it?

Allow me to capture your mind,

luring it into an open dimension,

holding it delicately in my hands,

my ink wondering over it's surface. 

Allow my words to penetrate its soft tissue,

soaking into your lobes,

words presenting an image;

a picture of waves of thoughts,

merging vigorously to create an idea.

Allow this idea to swirl uncontrollably,

encompassing your every dream,

your every aspiration.

As it funnels upwards let your fantasies be carried by it,

expanding across horizons and new frontiers.

Watch as your thoughts mingle with my own,

Our dreams, ideas, fantasies and visions become one.

Allow me to take the velvet reigns,

controlling the stallions which are our ambitions,

our passionate cravings;

steering you into my world as you take this ride.

Then gently I release the scarlet restraints,

allowing the beasts we tamed to barrel downwards;

explosively crashing into your open mind,

permanently leaving a poetic impression.

Reviews

[JC]

oh yea, dig this celestial fever of emotion, how a really good poem makes us feel when it brings our minds into the cosmos then crashing down, this gave me a Kerouac vibe not in similarity but in spiritual quality.

[Kiri Nells]

This amazing beyond belief! Why, oh why, does this not have more comments?! I am so impressed with this piece! Thank you for sharing!!

[Vinod Kumar U K]

Nice poem beyond the impression... great feel and comfort lines.

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

Great flow, just how I feel about poetry, myself. Wonderfully written, great write!

[Andrea Vargas]

I really enjuoyed it! You formed your words in a way where you are reaching towards your audience and capturing there attention. Keep writing this was fantastic.

[Megan]

wow this is great. It kind of reminds me of a rap haha. I really enjoyed reading this and the flow was amazing :) Great write and thank you so much for posting!