This is an ingeniously thought and well-structured poem... nay poem is not nearly the word I need.
Tapestry... this is a wonderfully woven piece of tapestry for the world to behold. I am stunned by the artistic talent you have with each line. It takes far more than mere words to conquer this task, and you my friend have done it.
As a writer, I tend to search for words to describe the feeling I felt when reading another’s words, here I am searching for words to describe the art I just saw.
This is a very original piece with excellent potential for becoming groundbreaking. I ponder on how many people have actually attempted this currently. I know I will - at least on scratch paper.
Thank you for displaying your art,
Legacy
You should place this one in the Love contest for Poetic Infusion Society.
This poem is so clever! I love how you've used language here to literally convey how you are feeling. Many of use poetry to convey our emotions, but very few of us successfully use literary techniques in this way. Very clever, very well writ and very powerfull. Good write.
Unique and gripping in a powerful way that keeps the reader on his toes, while keeping the entwined with cutting wordplay. I hope to see more of this style in the future, I think that you could gain your own identity with these compositions, not to mention that they are intricately flavorful to the reader.
This is an ingeniously thought and well-structured poem... nay poem is not nearly the word I need.
Tapestry... this is a wonderfully woven piece of tapestry for the world to behold. I am stunned by the artistic talent you have with each line. It takes far more than mere words to conquer this task, and you my friend have done it.
As a writer, I tend to search for words to describe the feeling I felt when reading another’s words, here I am searching for words to describe the art I just saw.
This is a very original piece with excellent potential for becoming groundbreaking. I ponder on how many people have actually attempted this currently. I know I will - at least on scratch paper.
Thank you for displaying your art,
Legacy
You should place this one in the Love contest for Poetic Infusion Society.
I love to write. Usually I have to feel inspired though; which could be brought on by anything at any moment. I suffer from writers block for a good chunk out of a year. Once I start writing though I .. more..