This is an ingeniously thought and well-structured poem... nay poem is not nearly the word I need.
Tapestry... this is a wonderfully woven piece of tapestry for the world to behold. I am stunned by the artistic talent you have with each line. It takes far more than mere words to conquer this task, and you my friend have done it.
As a writer, I tend to search for words to describe the feeling I felt when reading another’s words, here I am searching for words to describe the art I just saw.
This is a very original piece with excellent potential for becoming groundbreaking. I ponder on how many people have actually attempted this currently. I know I will - at least on scratch paper.
Thank you for displaying your art,
Legacy
You should place this one in the Love contest for Poetic Infusion Society.
Posted 13 Years Ago
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
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A visual experiance as wll as a piece of art this is what I call art To make something meaningful from ones thoughts and the reader in this case me is taken on the same hjourney Verynice
Tate
a great read,
i dont like the structure,
but i like the feeling about the poem,
i dont think it needs all that fuss,
but that is just me
Posted 13 Years Ago
Stunning! Great job, while reading this, it makes me think, and I guess this is the most beautiful way a poet can bring people somewhere else, then their own thoughts. Lovely! I'm a fan!
What a very fascinating style of writing a poem and I prefer to call it series of verses. I like how you express the emotions using creativity. The truth is, I have a hard time reading it at first. I reread it again and again. Now I understand it and it turned out great.
I love to write. Usually I have to feel inspired though; which could be brought on by anything at any moment. I suffer from writers block for a good chunk out of a year. Once I start writing though I .. more..