So It Begins

First poem I wrote for this site.

Testing,

testing.

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Alright, we're good to go.

So let me begin then.

I have a Facebook

and a Deviation Art account.

So anyways,

where should I go from there?

Alright, here's a poem I wrote

on the first day of school

in English IV.

Madman's on the loose,

growing grass down the lane.

I don't know if he exists

feel myself going under.

Help!

My last guffaw.

Losing all my marbles,

by looking into those eyes.

Madman's on the loose,

I'm sure he doesn't exist,

telling me what to do.

Yeah darling, are you there?

I must say, I can't tell anymore.

Please be my guiding light,

I can't see life without you.

Madmen running away,

escaping the Looney Bin,

to dance in the rain.

Are they there?

Thank you very much.

Reviews

[Alice1292]

I like the style and the pace of ths piece. I also liked how real it is to begin with then suddenly whoosh crazyland! I enjoyed reading this.

I really like this piece! Its got a unique style to it! Really great!