Silent changes

Quiet Earth

Find a place where you can just be one with yourself,
A place where yesterday's tracks are obliterated by the wind,
A place where tomorrow's events are only memories of yesterday's thoughts.
                         ~oOo~
Find a place where your mind can be one with the silence of you being there,
A place where yesterday's memories, tomorrow's dreams and a moments peace continue for hours,
A place where everything`s  just hidden in the silence of the nothingness.
                        ~oOo~
Find a place that can lie hidden in the world where yesterday and today, yield the same as tomorrow,
A place where the beauty of nothing brings no criticism to the gaze into the nothingness,
A place where time was standing still in the times of the unspeakable.
                        ~oOo~
Find a place where minutes feel like hours and days are nothing,
A place where you can become one with time, thoughts, promises, dreams,
A place where nothing has changed slowly with time.
                       ~oOo~
Find a place where yesterday is gone and tomorrow will show with time
A place where you will have no impact on the indescribable feeling of nothing,
A place where your presence is tolerated only to be one with time.
                       ~oOo~
Find a place where just being there is enough for a long time,
A place where nothing you do can change anything in time,
A place where time does n`t change the feeling of the unchangeable.
                       ~oOo~
Find a place where you can lose yourself in tomorrow and the thoughts of today,
A place where you leave no tracks in the space behind you,
A place where the future shows nothing in the distance.
                       ~oOo~
Find a place where you can have peace just being part of the moment,
A place where nothing and no one can ever disturb time,
A place where you can lose yourself in everything and still be nothing.

Reviews

[Lexi-Lu]

I mostly love how you use the theme/motif of Time. It's fabulous. I really like the poem, it's fanastic.

[Erana]

Thank you very much for saying that, appreciate your review
~E

[Kyaraa]

Great! superb phrasing I love it.

[Erana]

Thank you Kyaraa for reading this poem, appreciate your review
~E

[Saffaria]

This poem speaks of yesterday and tomorrow, "no tracks in the space behind you ... where the future shows nothing in the distance" and ends up leading the reader to the realization that only being in the present is where peace is found... "have peace just being part of the moment".
Brilliant, artful, truthful!

[Erana]

Thank you so much for those words...
~E