Reality

I wrote this in about a minute. Read it; it does not have the same elements my other ones would.

Reality

Tell me that I’m crazy!

Tell me that you’re sane!

Tell me life is but a dream

And you are my nightmare!

 

I want a better life for me!

I want to move on!

 

Stop smiling;

Stop looking at me

With those eyes!!!

 

I’m ready for the journey,

I’m ready to begin;

The past

Needs to disappear

And forget who I was.

 

I found a new future

That you are not a part,

But my heart

Is breaking,

Yearning for the magic.

 

I’m stabbed,

I’m bruised, and

I’m broken!

 

Let me live a life of love

Far from that smile!

 

STOP talking!

STOP tearing my reality!

 

My days with you

Are over.

Let me,

Let him

Take your place.

Reviews

[Caradoc]

Interesting.

An emotional write, to say the least. The narrator obviously wants the freedom to pursue a new life, without the pains that were overwhelming in the past. I sense a desperation in this piece, as if the narrator is being prevented from moving on to the better life they desire, either physically or mentally. For the former, sometimes a good restraining order is needed. In the case of the latter, only time can affect a change.

Not bad.

-Caradoc