Drug

poem for a girl i loved.

Jonesing for a hit,
Your voice an aural opiate
Coating my nerves,
Firing euphoric.
I wish I could distill your essence,
Inject you in my veins
As analgesic to your absence.

Reviews

[PhoeniX]

a feeling felt through your words. well written

[Illegitimate Artist]

Great analogy and choice of wording. You really get the feeling across of needing another human being like a fix. Its brilliant really. Awesome work!

[Not Afraid of Bruises]

I was raised under a strict code of ethics that leaves no room for drugs or drinking. However, if this poem is pertaining to a girl and not an actual drug, then the metaphor is great and well written. Sorry if I came off too strong, my mother was raised in a addictive atmosphere and she grew up trying to protect me from it. Best of luck, and keep writing