Pedal Mosaic

Pedal Mosaic

A Poem by ~EO
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Personal Rearrangement

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Devils take shape of many form,
Born from pedals fallen, counted, mourned,
One pedal to the ground, she loves me not,
As others follow, my count, I forgot,

Criss-cross on pedal carpet,
In hand, the stems,
A Basket,
Innocent cradle of colors,

To most; to me,
A Casket,

Drastic attempts for frantic flower reconstruction,
Its possible, lest I fall for Devil seductions.

© 2015 ~EO


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~EO
Any feedback is greatly appreciated :)

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aren't we all falling for Devil's seduction.... a remarkable poem dear EO. In our drastic atempts we do sometimes create beauty....hence the devil's breath upon our neck :D

Posted 9 Years Ago


~EO

9 Years Ago

thank you Ana B.; again your lovely words compliment every reason why i love to write.
Ana B.

9 Years Ago

:) well, i do hope writing brings happines in your days EO.
~EO

9 Years Ago

If not happiness, stability :)
And i wish the same for you!
A very beautiful poem. I feel as though this poem was somewhat about unwanted love, because it makes you feel trapped or locked in a cage. I may be wrong, but regardless I love the beauty of this poem. Great work :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


~EO

9 Years Ago

The beauty of writing, especially poetry; is that it is left up to interpretation, in which leaves t.. read more

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~EO
~EO

Bremerton, WA



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My name is Enrique Alberto Otanez, I am from Bremerton WA and I am In my early twenties. I have been writing for more than half my life as, not just an activity that I hold dearly; but at points being.. more..

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