Internal Supercedence

Internal Supercedence

A Poem by ~EO
"

Overcoming that which grows within.

"
Follow these lines down a fallen leaf road,
Weave a wilted worry through the poison you have sewn,
I fall into the galaxy which resides in your iris,
I hide inside your eye, so bright, I am sightless,
I fight this feeling that I'm dreaming, all the time that I'm not sleeping,
Anxiety it creeps and leaps into your heart and stops its beating,
A lacerated candy muscle, ceases but continues seeping,
Secrete with what you wish but I'll stick by MY "Don't Stop Believing",
A teething heathen while this concept perceptional demon,
Is busy clouding your dreams and is autodestructively scheming,
Evil that's descent from your very own dendritic root,
As parasitic youth cling to songs that sing false profetic truth,
This ruthless tumor brings minds gloom and mental tombs of self concealed rumors,
Accept and coexist with a sprinkle of bliss to at last become a bloomer.

© 2015 ~EO


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A very thought full poem, with more than one sense.......i love the 4th line. The title is a killer as well :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


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~EO

9 Years Ago

Thank you, its been a while since I've come up with anything I felt worthy of posting .

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~EO
~EO

Bremerton, WA



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My name is Enrique Alberto Otanez, I am from Bremerton WA and I am In my early twenties. I have been writing for more than half my life as, not just an activity that I hold dearly; but at points being.. more..

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