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Letting go is hard to do,

Trust you me I know.

A simple past engagement,

Takes so much time to heal.

A full years gone by,

And though we never talk,

There you are in my head.

Night by night you visit,

And when I wake I look,

For what I felt and heard,

Next to me you seemed to lay.

But in this world so cruel and true,

I know twas but a dream.

For like a ghost you disappear,

And make me want to SCREAM.

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[♪GetUse2MyMelodie..]

I agree with the person below me, the last stanza is my favorite. so rageful. Nice :)

[Between the grey]

i like and enjoyed your last stanza, quite the emotional write, like it