The Lady In The Clouds.

 

Looking up at at the sky,

catching my eye the perfect scenarios.

The architects in the clouds

carving perfect faces.

Time here must be passing slow.

They too live the time of a life.

Some dancing in the blue,

some sleeping in the dark,

some invisible, one with the sky,

some looking for the reason 'why'.

One such godly form,

the lady in the clouds.

Dancing with her colors fading

making her bright.

Fluttering her skirt, breaking through all the mirrors,

she's her own reflection.

She''s a hundred and she's one.

She knows the art,

she owns the sky, it's her earth.

But her own existence overlaps her beauty,

deforming her beautiful curves,

making her malleable,

transforming her into white mist.

The smokey romance in the cloudy sky,

is now her name.

-July 14, 2013

4:40 p.m

Reviews

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

The smokey romance in the cloudy sky,
is now her name. -- perfect conclusion to this piece...

Great use of poetic devices and imagery; showing the personification of the woman in the clouds, shifting her shape and becoming that which is the personification of beauty.

[Mehak Mushtaq]

Thank you Sarah. :)

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Superb piece of writing, thoroughly enjoyed reading this, well done :)

[Shadow Paradox]

Wow, what a precious jewel you've created here, my favorite line "She's a hundred and she's one" made me smile nice play with words. She seems like a beautiful Goddess. Nice imagery my friend, will ad to my favorites.

[Mehak Mushtaq]

I'm glad that you liked it. :) Thank you.

[Shadow Paradox]

Very welcome. Will read more. I added you.

[Mehak Mushtaq]

Thank you. :)

[Frieda P]

There's a soft beauty in this write, floats along as the clouds you write about, gorgeous read Mehak.

[Mehak Mushtaq]

Thank you Frieda. :)

[Frieda P]

Pleasure was mine Mehak. :-)

[Mehak Mushtaq]

:)

[Jack...]

Beautiful my friend. This one had my head in those clouds watching every movement. Very nicely done.

[Mehak Mushtaq]

Thank you Jack. :)

[Leslie Philibert]

I really enjoy reading the work of young poets, especially when they have such a bright literary future !

[Mehak Mushtaq]

I'm glad you think so. :) Thank you.

[Dhaye]

Beautiful! I like watching the clouds forming different shapes...

You have made a beautiful craft with a touch of romance, Mehak. Nice concept. :)

[Mehak Mushtaq]

Thank you. :)

[quinfinn]

i could sit and watch those cumulus clouds for hours, especially when it is a "blustery day" and there is much change and movement. this is marvelous and quite original, and has a life of its own. very cleverly done!

[Mehak Mushtaq]

Thank you Quin. :)

[Zahra]

Beautifully crafted, really exquisite piece.

[Mehak Mushtaq]

Thanks you. :)