This Valentine's, I Believe.

I hope it is okay - you and me,

Nothing big just happy life I foresee.

There have been those lot of lovers and charming guys,

Yet have been so many questions, whats and whys.

I lived a life all by myself before,

But I really don't remember it anymore.

All those fair faced men waiting for a chance,

And I had been waiting for a perfect romance.

I have lived love in so many faces,

And kept souvenirs in my silver cases.

But so often, have been bit by the cold winter night,

Those changing, evil weathers, your season is just right.

Is more than eternity anywhere?

So I could run with you there.

Not that life-ly relation of husband and wife,

No luggage of this earthly life.

Didn't have very much to think about,

I could hear so loud my heart shout.

No praises, no flattery, no promises you make,

That's how (we are/)this is real when everyone's fake. 

Commitments, words, no love letters you leave,

Not needed much, this is the first time I believe.

-Feb 14, 2013

12:43 a.m

Reviews

[Frieda P]

This is an amazing read, I can't say which stanza I love the most, it's enthralling from first to last....

But so often, have been bit by the cold winter night,
Those changing, evil weathers, your season is just right

Blew me away....

Are you sure you're 16?!

Adore this one...nicely pen'd!

[Mehak Mushtaq]

Thank you so much Frieda.

Hhaha, I am.

[Frieda P]

I don't believe you. ;-P

My pleasure...

[Mehak Mushtaq]

umm, well.. :P

[KAOlmsted]

You consistently blow me away with your words. This is just stunning. Thanks so much for sharing it with us.

[Mehak Mushtaq]

:) Thank you

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Maybe valentines, but relevent for all times...
great wisdom in it...

well done :)

[Mehak Mushtaq]

Thank you. :)

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

You most welcome :D

[khalid]

when we meet someone we feel love to, we start to feel we have never lived before we met them and we feel we dont want to live anymore without them. you have penned this in a very nice sweet way..i liked the words picking as well as the music heard through the lines..

[Mehak Mushtaq]

Thank you Khalid.

[quinfinn]

a teenaged girl who writes with the heart and soul of a grown and experienced woman...you are an amazing writer and this piece truly sings. wonderfully worded and superbly penned!

[Mehak Mushtaq]

Wow, now that's a big compliment. Thank you quin. :)

[quinfinn]

you are welcome

[Marie]

Very nice poem for Valentine's Day.

[Mehak Mushtaq]

Thank you.

[Nithin Purple]

nice poem ilike it

[Mehak Mushtaq]

I'm glad you did. Thank you Nithin. :)

[David Scott]

Your pen hit the mark. When we need assurances to feel loved then we must question if it was love at all... It is wonderful to know!

[Mehak Mushtaq]

Glad you liked it.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

beautiful verse!

[Mehak Mushtaq]

Thank you.

[Jack...]

You are so talented. This was very much filled with life, love and desires. very nice.

[Mehak Mushtaq]

Thank you. :)